Chapter 9 - It. Is. Time.
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Title: Truth Is A Whisper
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Drama/Angst, Romance, Smut
Warnings: language, alcohol and drug use, slash, cest, graphic (extremely kinky) sex
Summary: The past few months have been full of change and upheaval for Taylor, Zac and Carrick. They’ve all grown a lot, but they’ll find they still have a lot to learn about love and family.
Co-Written by AHopper84 (me) and Shewasred.
This is it. The chapter you've been waiting for. Nothing else to be said, but... bring it on.
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Date: 2014-04-08 10:19 am (UTC)Kudos to both of you for figuring out the logistics of this O.o
I mean, it's bad enough to write a scene with multiple characters, especially an action scene (and by 'action' I don't necessarily mean sexual action). It's really difficult to co-ordinate all the characters' dialogue, movements, where they are at any given point etc. I hate it when you read something and you can't picture the scene because the writer has left something out, and you're left wondering, 'where is she in the scene right now? Is there a continuity problem? Why doesn't this make sense?'
So anyway, you certainly did a good job with that threesome - I think it's fair to say that I could follow what was going on...