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ahopper84 ([personal profile] ahopper84) wrote2015-03-17 04:45 pm

Truth Is A Whisper: Chapter 20


Title: Truth Is A Whisper
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Drama/Angst, Romance, Smut
Warnings: language, alcohol and drug use, slash, cest, graphic (extremely kinky) sex
Summary: The past few months have been full of change and upheaval for Taylor, Zac and Carrick. They’ve all grown a lot, but they’ll find they still have a lot to learn about love and family.


Co-Written by AHopper84 (me) and Shewasred.


Sorry for the wait... again... life with a baby- correction, he's a toddler now (lord help me) can be a bit... hectic. But we're plugging away, and believe it or not, the end is in sight. Not right around the corner, but on the visible horizon. We, and especially I, want to thank everyone for your patience and dedication; this story has literally been with us through some pretty major life changes, and for my part at least, it's comforting to have something to hold on to when everything else is spiraling into the unknown. We love you guys, and we really hope this story is as important to you as it is to us. Okay, enough chick flick moment, on with the smutty goodness!


Truth Is A Whisper

[identity profile] malfunkshon.livejournal.com 2015-03-18 11:31 am (UTC)(link)
You know, I think this was going to happen. There's clearly a special bond with Zac and Taylor and however idealistic they can be about their threesome relationship, I think one will always be less keen, and it was always going to be Taylor.

Here's my favourite bit:

'As I wiggled out from under the tree, I heard a low whistle, and I had no doubts about its origin.

I glanced over my shoulder at Carrick, and sure enough, his eyes were open. “How long have you been watching me?”

“Long enough, babe.”


Anyway, I hope Isaac makes a comeback soon. I want to know if he finds out or not...!


[identity profile] sissyraerose.livejournal.com 2015-03-22 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwww this is the best chapter ever! It had so many great aspects to it. I wonder if/when Isaac will find out how he'll respond. And I wonder how much longer Carrick's part of the relationship can really last... Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!

[identity profile] sissyraerose.livejournal.com 2015-03-22 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I forgot to comment a few things...
This story is one of my top 3 Zaylors. (Which is the only hanfic I read. I can't stand them with girls/their wives. With the exception of "Zac Says Tay Still Wets the Bed")
Along with "Pages of Your Diary/Here We Go Again/Driftwood by @drunkinlov3. That story is also outstanding.
And Then there's "Bled Dry". (I'm waiting impatiently for an update on that one!)
And "Guilt", and almost all of @forgottenhall's stories... Okay, sorry for getting carried away.
Well, I just love how you write their relationship. (In all of your stories) it's the most realistic I've ever seen it written. (At this age at least. @drunkinlov3's is the best bb zaylor ever)
Some stories seem to have Zac in the more "dominant" role of the relationship. And I just can't figure out why... It seems so unrealistic, and it's mostly a deal-breaker for me.
I feel like Zac could be the more dominant person in a lot of relationships, but zaylor isn't one of them. Not only does Taylor seem like a control freak, but he's also Zac's big brother. Who he's looked up to since the day he was born.
Also, you're so good at writing emotions. And you pay such good attention to details; real details about them in real life. A lot of fanfic writers are the biggest fans, and they know so many tidbits about Hanson, but they don't always insinuate them into their fics. Small things like, Taylor's chest hair, and how awesome Zac's voice is on "Oh Darlin".
Keep it up!