I forgot to comment a few things... This story is one of my top 3 Zaylors. (Which is the only hanfic I read. I can't stand them with girls/their wives. With the exception of "Zac Says Tay Still Wets the Bed") Along with "Pages of Your Diary/Here We Go Again/Driftwood by @drunkinlov3. That story is also outstanding. And Then there's "Bled Dry". (I'm waiting impatiently for an update on that one!) And "Guilt", and almost all of @forgottenhall's stories... Okay, sorry for getting carried away. Well, I just love how you write their relationship. (In all of your stories) it's the most realistic I've ever seen it written. (At this age at least. @drunkinlov3's is the best bb zaylor ever) Some stories seem to have Zac in the more "dominant" role of the relationship. And I just can't figure out why... It seems so unrealistic, and it's mostly a deal-breaker for me. I feel like Zac could be the more dominant person in a lot of relationships, but zaylor isn't one of them. Not only does Taylor seem like a control freak, but he's also Zac's big brother. Who he's looked up to since the day he was born. Also, you're so good at writing emotions. And you pay such good attention to details; real details about them in real life. A lot of fanfic writers are the biggest fans, and they know so many tidbits about Hanson, but they don't always insinuate them into their fics. Small things like, Taylor's chest hair, and how awesome Zac's voice is on "Oh Darlin". Keep it up!
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This story is one of my top 3 Zaylors. (Which is the only hanfic I read. I can't stand them with girls/their wives. With the exception of "Zac Says Tay Still Wets the Bed")
Along with "Pages of Your Diary/Here We Go Again/Driftwood by @drunkinlov3. That story is also outstanding.
And Then there's "Bled Dry". (I'm waiting impatiently for an update on that one!)
And "Guilt", and almost all of @forgottenhall's stories... Okay, sorry for getting carried away.
Well, I just love how you write their relationship. (In all of your stories) it's the most realistic I've ever seen it written. (At this age at least. @drunkinlov3's is the best bb zaylor ever)
Some stories seem to have Zac in the more "dominant" role of the relationship. And I just can't figure out why... It seems so unrealistic, and it's mostly a deal-breaker for me.
I feel like Zac could be the more dominant person in a lot of relationships, but zaylor isn't one of them. Not only does Taylor seem like a control freak, but he's also Zac's big brother. Who he's looked up to since the day he was born.
Also, you're so good at writing emotions. And you pay such good attention to details; real details about them in real life. A lot of fanfic writers are the biggest fans, and they know so many tidbits about Hanson, but they don't always insinuate them into their fics. Small things like, Taylor's chest hair, and how awesome Zac's voice is on "Oh Darlin".
Keep it up!